A Google user
★★★
"It`s pretty good and well written but unfortunately its a little... Dry for me. Don`t get me wrong, there`s nothing wrong with this story, it just not my taste. I don`t get that feeling I`m in this story, you know what I mean... Anyway great work at this😀"
A Google user
★★★
"The story is good :)"
A Google user
★★
"I don`t recomend"
A Google user
★
"Almost every single game like this is chapter lock and very few are not very disappointing"
Version: 1.0.2
A Google user
★
"I don`t like the third person rubbish just makes me feel detached from everything. Besides that the story isn`t compelling nor do I care about any of the things I`m suddenly introduced to. The characters are bland. The main character is genderlocked to a female that is as interesting as paint drying. The story is just nonsensical and the achievements spoil the story before you even start playing. I would suggest to anyone thinking of buying this to save the money and save yourself from disappointment."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"the third person perspctive ruins it"
Adam Young
★★
"I actually purchased this book. This story is hard to follow. It was difficult to know what was happening with how much the narrative jumps around. Not enough character development. The plot is decent but the implementation leaves something to be desired. If you fail a stat check the game just ends and it ends badly. There is a story here but with frustrating stats, confusing language, and a storyline that jumps around its hard to comprehend."
Version: 1.0.2
A Google user
★★★★★
"I like the game overall but the third person point of view I didn`t like for all this pretty good."
A Google user
★
"This story is trash, horrible choice of words for the most part, and the thrid person view is pretty stupid. You had great potential but it didn`t show here."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"Not to be mean, but the Mary Sue protagonist kind of seems to be a running theme with this author. It`s so weird when random people call the MC ``dear one`` when they`ve never even met her before. It just seems that all of the author`s games have that one female MC where every character`s reaction to them is, ``I don`t know you, but I can tell just by looking at you that you are a kind, heroic and all around perfect person.`` I personally find it really off putting. Love, trust and friendship are things the MC should earn, not just be given automatically because for some reason everybody thinks you`re female Jesus."
Version: 1.0.0
Dian Dimitrov
★★★★
"I liked the third person narative quite a lot actually. The story was interesting and engaging. Grammar and sentence structure leaves a bit to be desired."
Version: 1.0.2
A Google user
★★
"The writing is confusing, making it kind of a hard read. Poor word choice. Bad grammar. Plus the third person perspective kind of defeats the point of interactive fiction. Dialogue seems... bland and lifeless."
Version: 1.0.0