A Google user
★★★★★
"Excellent book/game!! Never thought I could fall in love with an insectoid queen...can`t wait to read my next story :D"
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★★
"Not bad, but it was a little short. The grammar threw me once in a while, but it wasn`t the worst Ive seen."
A Google user
★★★★★
"I really like the story line in this."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★★
"The story is fine. Not golden but fine. Overall there is a ton of mistakes both programmed and writte but its free and i cant complain"
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★
"The story was passable, I suppose, but the syntax was so awkward even reading it once was a chore."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★
"Listen, dont take too much pressure on urselves. Just try your best to correct those mistakes."
A Google user
★★★★★
"Another great game from the guys at hosted games. Loved the fact that it was free, sometimes i found the ads a bit too intrusive but weren`t too bad."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★
"There`s a lot of grammar errors and mispellings. There also aren`t any checkpoints or savepoints, which isn`t great considering that in certain scenarios, you can die instantly."
Version: 1.0.2
A Google user
★★★★★
"Great game so far want to see a sequel but could use some simple fixes here and there"
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★
"Worst writing ive ever seen on an interactive novel. I buy every one i read but i couldnt bring myself to do it. Its like 0 people proofread this, and if they did they should be fired."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★
"Interesting, but very confusing."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★
"It`s shorter than other games like this but I though if well written it could still be a good game. However it is not well written. It is full of spelling mistakes and the use of the wrong word and the narrative isn`t very gripping. I found myself just playing to get to the end in the hope it gets better but it didn`t."
A Google user
★★★★★
"It`s a good game even though it has spelling errors you just have to look past that and enjoy it"
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★★★
"I loved the game."
Version: 1.0.3
A Google user
★★
"This was written with the intelligence of a child. It seemed like a good concept. But it was executed extremely poorly."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★
"This had a lot of potential. Needs some major editing and some thought regarding some of the options. I played through several times and the romances seem to have been thrown in there as almost an afterthought with exceptions to like two. Story seemed to jump a lot as well. The explanation for your equipment seems awful and even now I have very little of an idea of what the black and red dots are. There are also either glitches that should be taken care of that seem to allow for an infinite amount of the dots and relationship growth in the door scene. Overall I liked the idea behind it, but the method was almost lazy. Poor grammar and character development as well as an almost nonexistent stat system make you wonder if you are really doing anything."
A Google user
★
"Worst spelling and grammsr issues I`ve seen in a game like this yet. There was definitely potential but I didn`t even want to finish it after the sheer amount of glaring problems."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★★
"Some grammar issues and it could have used an epelgue"
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★
"The story had potential to go somewhere, but it threw you into a world expecting you to be able to grip everything easily. The writing completely ruined that, from grammar errors to sentences not even making sense, it shot itself down. For being free with ads, I didn`t expect something too great considering it`s length, but was more disappointed than I imagined. It could have been better, really."
Version: 1.0.1
A Google user
★★★★★
"Love it even though the grammar is atrocious."