A Google user
★
"Awful. Not worth spending money on or reading."
Version: 1.1.0
A Google user
★★
"I hope this Uzbekistan teen knows English,which sadly he don`t.But never mind,but please update this app and correct all the typos.Almost nothing is understandable,for the word arrangement is way too messy.And some brought the same meaning too.But the plot is great.At least that was if its not tainted with misspells."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"I`m finding it hard to get in to it simply because the words are either mixed up or used wrong and I only just started."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★
"I played this on pc first and it is a good game it just needs to be proofread badly. I do hope the writer finishes the story as it is good the English is just a big putoff"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"Look I think the writer has a good story here. Just needs a native English speaker or anyone to fix all the grammar problems. There were several on the first page. I`m not even a grammar Nazi, its just hard to focus on the story because of the errors. Get that fixed and I`ll give u a great review."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"More Story less game of choices"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"Bad language structure is far worse of a sin than bad spelling."
A Google user
★
"Worst book I`ve read in the whole of both choice of games llc hosted games llc .."
Version: 1.1.0
A Google user
★
"The English is very bad and it makes it hard to get into the story"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"The grammar is so horrible as to make the story unreadable. Waste of money until it is spellchecked and edited by a native English speaker."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★
"I had a hard time reading it. The plot is cool and the characters are fine."
A Google user
★★
"Their is still alot of grammatical errors. Im going to keep the game though and hope they update it with all the errors fixed!"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"English. The author clearly speaks English as a second language, and has neglected to have a native speaker or at least someone more proficient in the language proofread and edit his work. The entire work is filled with choppy, poorly phrased sentences; some so much so that you can`t even tell what they are trying to say. It is headache to read and entirely destroys any immersion in the story. Until this is fixed, I would not recommend buying this game."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"Almost unintelligable. This should not be for sale at all. There has been no effort put into the translation whatsoever and I would like my money back."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"Terrible grammer. Hard to read."
A Google user
★★
"Again, I couldn`t get into it like with the demo, the English is still very choppy and someone should have helped edit it more before releasing it. I`m sure it`s a great game, I just can`t really get into it. I won`t refund, for support of the author, but I`d like to see changes made when the game is updated."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★★
"its alright but seriously i know it seems like a pain but get someone to translate or atleast fix it cause its bad man real bad not the story but the articulation"
Version: 1.1.1
A Google user
★
"The grammer is horrid. I bought it and could only barely force myself through what I think is chapter 1. I didn`t even begin the adventure."
Version: 1.1.0
A Google user
★
"Horrible grammer and spelling I can`t even make it through half a page once it improves I will read it"
Version: 1.1.0
A Google user
★★★★
"The English was written strangely but it added to the flavor and language of the words as if it really was from another world. I enjoyed it and they length was very satisfying."