Adam Young
★★
"I actually purchased this book. The story is short and to the point. Little to no character development or imagery. This is a choose your own adventure with many different ending but not well implemented. The characters seem hollow and unadorned. I do not recommend this story."
Version: 1.0.2
Daniel Jones
★
"There`s quite a few mistakes that just kept taking me out the story as I tried to piece together what it was saying. The stats didn`t really seem to matter as I had no problem using things I`m not good at. I played it a few times and the pacing is just awful, the characters dry, the plot railroaded. Very short game, very few achievements, not a great experience overall. Would not recommend, play Choice of Magics or Sorcerer`s apprentice instead."
Version: 1.0.0
Mr Incognito
★★
"``Mom can we get `The Last Wizard`.`` ``No, we already have `The last wizard` at home.`` The Last Wizard at home:"
Version: 1.0.1
aranyak chakraborty
★
"Writings seems very very ameturish And the grammar is horrible"
Version: 1.0.2
TaurusJinx 96
★
"The story is not very elaborate or detailed. Seemed more like a chapter than s full story. Not one of the best cyoa games by this dev. If you want a short and straightforward story then yeah maybe give this a try but I recommend looking up other stories/games."
Leroy Harsten
★
"Please make more free games"
Version: 1.0.2
Xii
★★
"The magic system is interesting and a cool idea but the story is very short. Plus because of the length of the story I felt little to no attachment to the characters, or their struggles. In moments where my character was emotional I felt absolutely nothing. This applies with my own character too, I made too few choices with how they were feeling to be invested in what I was doing."
Christina LeCocq
★★
"The premise is good, but oh, the grammar! The spelling! It`s kind of like reading a story for sixth grade English class that hasn`t been proofread."
Version: 1.0.1
Stephan Juanda
★
"It seems that the quality of Hosted Games works has gone downhill lately, the only good one recently is wayhaven chronicles part 2, this one is just awful...jesus, I will only pay for a game, when the game is worth it and deserves it."
Callum Baty
★★
"Poorly written story, that seems rushed and is frankly unenjoyable"
Version: 1.0.2
Fire&Shadow
★
"They fixed the game and now I can give a complete review the concept was good but it was poorly done had many mistakes it wasn`t even ¼ as long as what a choice of games game is and on top of all of that you had to pay to finish it which is very wrong I`ve been with Choice of Games since the beginning and this is worse than their first games that was made you need to make this game free instead of charging for it or maybe the person can redo it and actually make a decent game this time"
Version: 1.0.1
Venigalla Prateek
★★
"Not so bad... 😽😸😼 There are enough mistakes to kill anyone with OCD..."
Version: 1.0.0
Katie M. Williams
★
"It seems my previous review got deleted. Honestly while I`m happy that the author got their game out, this is terribly done. The grammar and spelling are not only bad, but the writing itself is very amateurish. Hosted games really needs to get some proofreaders and editors rather than just publishing whatever comes their way. With the quality of a lot of the works, this simply doesn`t compare, and I can`t in good faith pay money for it or recommend it."
Version: 1.0.1
Bryce Sanders
★
"Couldn`t finish it. I didn`t understand the story. it jumped you in the middle of the story with no build up and with forgettable characters. I really think this should not be paid content"
The Amazing Lucia
★
"Very short, common English mistakes sprinkled in, feels too much like a videogame at times, some scenes are non-optional and make no sense if you take the villain ending, endings don`t at all feel worth it, shoddy writing in general, magic system is kind of boring since it`s never explained and just functions as a means to an end for the magic story the author was envisioning"
Version: 1.0.2
Miguel Esteban
★★★★★
"A nice little game. Many of the earlier reviews for the games commented on poor grammar, but when I played it would seem most must have been fixed (I was playing after the 1.0.2 update). The game allows you to choose from different schools of magic and just a variety of spells, and is generally entertaining. I`d recommend people to ignore the comments prior to this 1.0.2 version and give it a go!"
Version: 1.0.2
Alex Gaudette
★★
"This game was not very enjoyable it doesnt have any near the amount of choice others of its type do. Your character is kinda set u can really decide who they are I wanted to be a indifferent careless sorcer but it keeps forcing morality on me."
Version: 1.0.2
Luis Ferdinand
★★★★
"I wanted to give it 2 or 1 star but i will give it 4 stars for now and i hope you won`t dissappoint me again and fix as much as you can and i suggest making it free of course the players or readears must watch adds to play or read the rest of the game or book"
Version: 1.0.2
Jeff Bowden
★★
"Not a bad story was hoping for romance though."
Version: 1.0.2