A Google user
★
"I uninstalled it before the story even began. I love Choice of games stories because they are immersive (yeah, not so much when you use third person), and because the character is really mine (or else what would be the difference from reading a novel ?). And then you put gender roles on top of that. Too bad, I was actually looking for a good romance, but this was a huge disappointment."
A Google user
★★★★★
"It was kinda corny in a few ways but was also sweet. I am pleased that it was possible to get the happy ending and save whoever possible all the while not dying. It was a nice story with a, in my opinion, satisfying end"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★★
"Kinda boring and a little complicated."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"I don`t feel connected to these characters at all. I get the feeling I`m not wanted here in the story. A no from me."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★
"I like the story but you should not give control of both protagonist in one hand it become more easy to complete it you may add a choice to become male or female protagonist"
A Google user
★★★
"Needs a lot of work. I am a fan of the story but it was hard to get into because certain parts were not translated perfectly. This could be a great book but it needs some TLC."
Version: 1.0.0
Severine Letum
★★★
"It`s honestly disappointing. Either way, I`m giving three stars for the effort."
A Google user
★★
"I wasn`t really bothered by the 3rd person POV. What really put me off is
just how unlikeable the characters are. The female MC is just the ultimate
Mary Sue who is constantly being complemented for no reason, and who is
described as ``sweet`` ``innocent`` and ``pure``, but throughout the game, she
cheats on her husband (with a man who is also married), kidnaps a baby
dragon from it`s nest because she wants to keep it as a pet, and admits
that she`s glad her stepfather was murdered because she never liked him
anyway. Also, the two lovers never spend any time actually getting to know
each other. They just see that the other person is attractive and decide
they`re in love straight away. So, as it is, it doesn`t feel like I`m
reading a story about ``pure, unconditional love``, but rather a story about
two not particularly nice people who have an affair based solely on shallow
physical attraction."
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★
"The first half was well written and is an interesting story. However, the second half seems rushed and the dialogue is incomprehensible in some part due to grammar and spelling errors. A solid first try for the writer, though a good editor would have done this story justice. Overall, it`s a ok read for free. I`m just glad I didn`t pay for it because I won`t read it again."
A Google user
★★★★★
"Awesome game though at first I didn`t understand what to do. But when I did I couldn`t stop playing"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★
"Confusingly written. Half the time i struggled through the grammar. The point of view changes were awkward."
A Google user
★★★★★
"The story is beautiful although there are some minor grammar mistakes."
A Google user
★★
"I didn`t feel any connection to the characters. The story was made confusing by the multiple gimmicks being tossed around (ex:alternate timelines, alien planets, etc.). The dialogue felt cheesy and fake and further distanced me from the characters. There were also a myriad of typos and grammatical errors that showed that the author didn`t take the time to proof read his work. Overall it was a disappointing experience that I do not wish to repeat and I expected a lot better from Hosted Games."
Patricia Letwaba
★★★★★
"Captivating all the way but game ended abruptly. Not cool at all"
Version: 1.0.2
A Google user
★
"If you want to write a story, write a story. This is not a choices, first person game where you, the Reader, matter at all. It`s a trite romantic drama with prompts. Boring."
A Google user
★
"The people who made this probably thought an immersive story is thousand of words that made such cringe worthy plot i dont even feel involved with the chararcters. They try to make it feel like a play but instead it just made the story more cringy and the 3rd person point of view destroyed the story the moment it started ,its like im playing a dating sim game then a game book about love, good and darkness"
Version: 1.0.0
A Google user
★★★★★
"This is amazing. Simply amazing."
A Google user
★
"One of the worst stories from Hosted Games.Although the author tries to make the story playable from both of the MC`s aspect but I do not feel any connection with them whatsoever. The quality of the story isn`t very high either. I do know that Hosted Games is a platform for amateur writers but at least you must set some standards for the stories you publish."
A Google user
★★
"Death without checkpoints. You can die and have to start the whole thing
over again"
A Google user
★
"Too mushy gushy and just overall poorly written"