John Hopkins
★
"This is probably one of your worst games. There are multiple punctuation and grammar errors. Your chioces dont even matter, the game just does what it wants. It seemed like an interesting story until it started taking my choices away."
The Darkone
★
"Absolute masterpiece my favorite part was when soldier one said Soldier 1:It`s soldiering time And soldiered all over the formorians truly the game of all time"
Version: 1.0.3
Hollow Eyes
★
"The writing style could use some work. This dialogue style kinda takes away from the experience because it feels out of place. Soldier 1:``Dialogue`` Soldier 2:``Dialogue`` Also don`t shorten words if you can help it. PM for possessed man breaks any feeling of tension. You could have just described the man`s condition without directly naming his affliction. ``The soldier stands still,his seemingly lifeless gaze flickering to you as he speaks in a voice not his own.`` Something like this."
Chris Jeffery
★★
"It`s a good genre to pick from, good idea but the massive amount of grammatical errors made me lose my place and mind set to the point of annoyance and I couldn`t enjoy the read, so I Uninstalled until it gets fixed."
Inara Dombrovski
★★★
"It seems like this wasn`t proof-read. There are quite a few grammar mistakes that need to be fixed; they`re distracting and taking away my focus of the story."
Version: 1.0.2
Ali G
★★★★★
"A breath of fresh air. A bit simplistic in nature, but clever twists on what would otherwise be a cliche world."
Version: 1.0.3
Roland Ley
★★
"Where is the quality control? Did CoG fire them all? I am barely in 5 pages and there are a multitude of typos and a choice bug already. The story starts with a linear storytelling in which your character barely gets to make decisions, YOU as player lack control in many scenes on what to act like, or say. Why bother with British/Irish legend namedrops, if you put a map of modern France there anyway? Not having a map would have been simply better. EDIT: Later it only gets worse with typos and all"
Tal Collier
★★★★★
"YOU GET 5 STARS FOR NOT ADDING ANY WEIRD MAKE BELIEVE GENDERS"
Josh Uphill
★★★
"A lot of spelling mistakes. I unistalled after 2 minutes of reading. Other reading games from this developer are much better but worth giving a try if you can put up with it."
Version: 1.0.3
Ogunleti Isaiah
★★★
"An interesting story but too simple decision with no repercussions for action"
Night Bro
★★
"First the game doesnt let us choose what to do most of the time Second story doesn`t encourage to read more And thats why i gave it 2 stars"
Veedestroye 45
★
"Its sooooo bad why was this even released"
Tor Kak
★★
"I wish I could have given it a higher rating. However too many grammar, punctuation and spelling errors can make it a hard read for most. There were several times I made a selection, and then when reading the outcome of that selection, I found the narrative giving me the results of what I selected and another result right after, one that I did not select. I did enjoy the read"
Version: 1.0.3
Mr Incognito
★★★
"Formorian War is set in an alternate reality right after the Seven Years War, a world much similiar to ours, however, instead of the Brits and Germans moderately beating up the French just like IRL, the beating in this timeline was 69% more servere resulting in the Frenchmen of this timeline to possess notably higher Germanic characteristics due to copius amount of Copium in their bloodstream correlated from loosing said war. Remember kids, you can`t lose to the enemy if you are the enemy. 😎"
Version: 1.0.3
Threedog
★
"I am honestly at a lack for words. I guess ``horrendously unreadable`` would be the most accurate of how I feel."
Travis Curran
★
"Well I`d love to play the game, but it doesnt load at all. Just freezes."
Version: 1.0.0
Rosy Kayrouz
★
"God this is so bad how was this even approved?"
Vasea Random
★
"How did this even get approved..."
Avenged Spector
★
"I couldn`t even finish the first chapter. It`s like the author has no idea how a basic sentence works. Absolutely aweful"
A filthy casual.
★★★★
"The game is okay, has a lot of potential, but it needs a lot more polish, especially with the text. The text is hard to read, as most of the time it`s all an incredibly long wall of text. It also has some spelling mistakes as well. The dialogue needs more polish. It`s missing proper punctuation and capitalization, and reads more like a bad fanfiction. It has potential, but it`s brought down by its lack of polish and its first draft syndrome. With more editing and polish, this story will shine."
Version: 1.0.2